This feels like a scream wrapped in glitter. The imagery worked really well- both grotesque and gorgeous at the same time.
‘she is, but she wants to know it’ is probably the most devastating line.. it perfectly captures that gap between being beautiful and actually believing it. Thank you so much for sharing 🖤
this is so beautiful
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I can almost hear sad music in the background. There’s such a melancholic tone stuck to every line
Powerful. I especially love the line "Rubies are littered on the bathroom floor" it's such a hauntingly beautiful image
Thank you so much Vexx!!
fantastic honestly great work here
This feels like a scream wrapped in glitter. The imagery worked really well- both grotesque and gorgeous at the same time.
‘she is, but she wants to know it’ is probably the most devastating line.. it perfectly captures that gap between being beautiful and actually believing it. Thank you so much for sharing 🖤
Thank you so so much!!
But money can’t un rot her from the inside out,
Amazing line. Loved this
Wow love this story beautifully written ❤️